174 An Even Better Story! (2/2)

Now, only Jin Bao Fu was left. Regarding this name, he felt it to be a real pity. After using it so many times in the last few chapters he had already gotten quite used to it. Well, but he definitely had to give the antagonist a name the readers wouldn't get mixed up. Just imagine them mistaking the sect master for the antagonist or the other way around! No, he couldn't let that happen!

Mn, then how about … Su Yan frowned and tried to think of a good name but he couldn't come up with anything. Ugh. He really liked this name! It sounded so nice. Eh? Wait. Who said he couldn't keep it like that? He just had to use another character with the same pronunciation and all should be fine.

Su Yan grinned and hurriedly changed the character he had used until now. There! Wasn't that good now? The system shouldn't have anything more to say about his characters' names, should it?

He took a look at the other two suggestions again and frowned. Conveying information through actions and … showing off his language skills? What did the system want to say with that? Especially the second one. It couldn't be that the system meant that his skills weren't good enough, could it?

Nah, that was impossible! He had gotten such a good rating this time. There should be nothing wrong with the way he wrote those chapters. Su Yan pressed his lips together and looked at the rating again. Actually … his lowest scores were the ones for his writing style and the incorporation of information. Exactly the two things the system had made the suggestions for! This probably wasn't a coincidence?

Su Yan frowned. It wasn't like there had never been readers of his old stories who said that he couldn't write and should better go do something else in his leisure time but he had always thought those were just some idiots who had no idea what they were talking about. Then how come the system suddenly said the same thing?! This wasn't reasonable at all!

He turned to look at Nie Chang but didn't know what to say. Nie Chang might have said that he had read everything he wrote so far but he was his boyfriend. If he asked him if he actually could write, then he would gain nothing. Nie Chang was just too biased!

Su Yan glared at him before turning back to his notebook with a snort. Tch, as if he needed to ask his boyfriend for something like this! He was able to figure this out all on his own!

Mn … Su Yan stared at the rating for a while but finally sighed. There was no use. He had no idea what exactly the system's problem was this time. It hadn't even provided any clues for him! Wasn't this straight-up bullying him?!

Su Yan propped his head up on his hands and pursed his lips. His writing style … How to make it better? Maybe he should just …

Su Yan straightened up. Right! Why hadn't he thought of this sooner?! Didn't he have those practice tasks?! There should be some task to practice his style too! And if he used that, then the system needed to provide him with detailed feedback. Ah, he was just too brilliant! He needed to try it out at once to make his second story even better!