174 An Even Better Story! (1/2)

After eating Su Yan immediately went back to work. After all, he still had some hours until the dinner with his parents so he should make good use of the time. Looking at the suggestions of the Lovely Writing System again he couldn't help but purse his lips.

He could live with the second and third suggestion but the first one really made him feel dumb. He had actually used the character 'Fu' five times without noticing! And disregarding Dou Jin Fu and maybe Yue Fu Gang these names were all important!

Jin Bao Fu was the story's antagonist so he would appear on a regular basis and have lots of interactions with the protagonist and the male lead. Xue Chang Fu was the sect master of the Jin Shan Sect so he would also be present a lot. At the very least he would be there for all the important events in the sect like challenges or gatherings with other sects or things like that. His name would likewise show up often. Even Yue Fu Gang might be there often considering that he was an important Elder of the sect and had a close relationship with the sect master.

The Fu Yun peak was just the same as the characters. This was the peak that Ziju An oversaw and where he and the protagonist would spend most of their time. It would be strange if the name didn't appear every so often!

No, he had to make changes! The only problem was … The first chapter was already published and both Xue Chang Fu's name, as well as the Fu Yun peak, had already been mentioned. He couldn't change either of them.

Su Yan sighed. Luckily, he hadn't mentioned Jin Bao Fu's name too and only wrote that the person who was supposed to come was the youngest prince of the kingdom. At last the antagonist's name could still be changed.

”Mn …” Su Yan stared at the names.

There were five of them and two couldn't be changed anymore. So he should probably change the other three? So how about … Dou Jin Lei for Dou Fang Hai's uncle? Mn, that didn't sound too bad.

He opened the document where he had written the first chapters and went through them again to change the name. Looking at the new name he felt quite good. Ah, changing a name wasn't so bad. If it helped to make his story better he would change all the names that hadn't been mentioned in the first chapter.

”Ah, luckily, I had the revised version checked before uploading more than that! Otherwise, it really would have been difficult to get out of this …”

He shook his head and looked at the next name. Yue Fu Gang. Mn … This person was a tough man. How about using 'Mu' instead of 'Fu'? Mn, a strong tree it was then. That should work too. He nodded to himself and changed the next name.