Part 3 (2/2)
”Why, Archie,” pursued the literary man--he turned toward Mr. Weil--”you remember Lelia Dante, you have seen her here. Five or six years ago I got a letter from that young girl's mother asking me to come to their residence and hear a story she had written. It was her first one, and the child was not a day over seventeen. I couldn't believe it when she came into the room, with her hair tumbled about her shoulders, and began to read to me the first chapter of 'Zaros.' 'Did _she_ write that?' I asked her mother, incredulously. 'Certainly,' she replied. 'Without aid from any one?' 'Absolutely alone.' My hair stood on end. I could not keep it down for the next week with a brush. You know the story. We printed it, and it sold well, and that is all that C. & S. cared about it; but I never understood how that infant could conceive it. No more than I can understand your ability to write this story of yours, Miss Fern,” he added, pointedly.
The young woman bridled a little.
”It does not matter much, if you are not going to print it,” she said, raising her eyes to his.
He bowed low to express whatever apology might be necessary.
”I would have accepted it if I could,” he said. ”My entire life is spent in reading ma.n.u.scripts in the hope of discovering one that will make a hit with the public to whom we cater. When successful I am as pleased as a South African who fishes a diamond of the first water out of the mine.
Your story, Miss Fern, shows decided talent. You have a greater knowledge of some of the important things of life, I will wager, than your grandmother had at eighty, if she lived so long. As I am obliged to go now, let me add, without mincing matters, that you are very deficient in English grammar, and that nothing you can write will be acceptable to any first-cla.s.s house until that fault is remedied. Are you ready, Archie?”
Mr. Weil felt indignant. He could not have spoken to any girl as pretty as this one in such language, and he thought it quite inexcusable on the part of his friend to do so. Mr. Gouger, though feeling that it was best to use little circ.u.mlocution, had not meant to wound his caller. But her countenance showed that he _had_ wounded her, and the natural gallantry of his younger companion came to the rescue.
”I am not ready yet,” said Mr. Weil, telegraphing at the same time a series of signals with his eyes. ”I want a few minutes' talk with Miss Fern, if you will introduce me. I think I can say something she will like to hear.”
Mr. Gouger, who now stood in such a position that Miss Fern could not see him, shook his head to imply that he did not fancy this arrangement; but he ended by saying, ”Very well.” He then abruptly made the presentation, put on his hat, said good-by, and vanished.
Miss Millicent, who had risen, turned with an air of puzzled inquiry toward Mr. Weil.
”Be seated again, for a moment,” he said, politely. ”I want your permission to read your story.”
”Why, I don't know,” she answered. ”Are you one of the employes of Cutt & Slashem?”
He smilingly denied the imputation.
”I have not that felicity,” he added, ”but I am much interested in things literary, and have a rather wide acquaintance in this line of business. If I could be allowed to read your MSS. perhaps I should form a milder opinion of its faults than my unbending friend. And in that case a word from me, to another house, would certainly do you no harm.”
A brighter light came into Miss Millicent's eyes.
”I shall be only too glad to have you read it,” she answered. ”It is hard to believe that I have wasted almost a year in something entirely worthless. You may take it with pleasure.”
Mr. Weil went to Mr. Gouger's desk, from which he soon came with the parcel in question. He untied the string and for a moment his gaze rested on the handwriting.
”Do you live far from here?” he began; and then added, as he noticed the address on an enclosed card, ”Ah, I see! At Midlands.”
She explained herself rather more to him, giving the full address of her father, and some particulars about the manner in which she had been drawn into attempting literary work. He listened intently, all the time engaged in rapid thought.
”The best way for me to get a thoroughly correct impression of this novel,” he said, when she came to a pause, ”is to hear you read it aloud. In that manner,” he added, as he saw that she was about to interrupt, ”a hundred meanings would come to the surface that a mere inspection of the pages might fail to show. Beside, there would be an opportunity for discussion. If convenient to you I would gladly come to your residence for this purpose.”
The eyes of the young girl brightened. She was greatly pleased at the idea and said so without delay.
”Very well,” said Mr. Weil, more than delighted with the success of his experiment. ”To-day is Tuesday; shall I come for the first time, say, Thursday evening?”
”That would suit me perfectly; or to-morrow, if you wish. I shall put aside everything and have my time free for you.”
Mr. Weil nodded.
”Let it be Thursday then. And the hour--shall we call it eight?”
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