Chapter 1014 (2/2)
After reading the first part of the text written by xiazhiqiu Shiyu and Yamada goblin, founder also fell into deep thinking.
Strictly speaking, they have their own advantages and disadvantages. After all, goblins are members of the dark moon sword guild. They respect facts in character creation and story flow, but they are a little rough in delicate description.
But xiazhiqiu Shiyu is just the opposite. Just as the goblin of Yamada mocks her, although she works hard to write the first part and the plot is wonderful, how does Fang Zheng feel like the script of Gong douju However, in fact, in the dark moon sword guild, gongdou is almost invisible. In this respect, xiazhiqiu Shiyu must be out of the game.
After all, this is a novel about their guild. If Fang Zheng wants to see the positive energy of everyone working together to kill the boss and finally win the customs clearance, not the negative energy of several women laughing and playing Kung Fu, let alone the fact that it is adapted according to reality. In case they see each other's description after publication, they suspect that each other really wants to do so Law Even if it is true, it can't be written out!
But in addition, Fang Zheng has to admit that xiazhiqiu Shiyu is much better than Yamada goblin in the emotional depiction of the characters. If this is not based on the dark moon sword in reality, but a pure fantasy script, then the latter's advantage is obviously greater.
After reading the manuscript of both sides, founder has made a decision.
”Generally speaking, the goblin's choice is right.”
Putting down the manuscript, Fang Zheng looked at the goblin and Xia's Qiu Shiyu and said, but hearing Fang Zheng's reply, the goblin immediately raised his head, and Xia's Qiu Shiyu frowned.
”Why...”
”We're not in love.”
Fang Zheng clapped the manuscript.
”Miss Xia Zhi Qiu Shiyu, you should know that this is a story adapted from the reality. You should follow the reality. You can ask anyone in our guild. During the strategy period, everyone didn't have the heart to think about the messy things you wrote in the story. At that time, we had to worry about whether we could come back alive every time we went to war. Do you think we would be in the mood to play gongdou A trick? ”
”Woo...”
Hearing this, Shiyu of xiazhiqiu can't help biting his teeth. As Fang Zheng said, her biggest shortcoming is that xiazhiqiu Shiyu didn't enter the game of death, and her understanding of the game of death was only heard from Yingli, and she didn't feel like a goblin.
However, founder has done much more to give a date with a stick.
”But in terms of emotional description and infection, miss xiazhiqiu Shiyu is really unique, so I have a suggestion.”
As he spoke, Fang Zheng put down his manuscript and looked at them.
”If you agree, I suggest that you two work together to write this novel The goblin is responsible for the outline and the main body, and the rendering of the details is given to Miss Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu What do you think of that? ”
”Well? Want to work with her? ”
Hearing this, the goblin and xiazhiqiu Shiyu jump up in surprise. They open their mouths and want to argue. However, Fang Zheng directly interrupted their conversation.
”Yes, after reading the original, I think it's a very suitable combination. You can also look at each other's original and experience each other Well, that's it. ”
Founder didn't give them a chance to refute, and they didn't say much. With a complicated expression, they picked up each other's manuscript and left founder's office. And until this time, Fang Zheng just stretched a stretch, relieved.
”Hoo Finally solved But it's a wonderful world... ”
While sighing, founder turned around and looked back at the city outside the window.
If he had just crossed over to this world, I'm afraid he would never return to the main world. After all, in this world, founder can live a familiar life like a fish in water. It's so good I really want to stay here all my life At that time, Xiangche beauty, what you want, how comfortable it is to live here I don't want to play anymore
”Ding!”
However, founder's feeling is not over, suddenly a prompt sound, and then a line of information appeared in front of founder.
[when the exploration task is started, please enter the new copy within 24 hours to carry out the task]
[our journey is the sea of stars, not a corner, gather all your things, and move towards the infinite sea of stars]
[requirements: the development rate of new copy is more than 35%, and the means are unlimited]
[the task successfully obtains new power evaluation, with random attribute Call enhancement]
[if the task fails, users are not allowed to enter the free world]
”......”Looking at the system reminder in front of him, founder was silent.
I'm just being lazy, isn't it?