Chapter 389 (1/2)
The script submitted by Bai Cang is not the final version, and there is still a lot of room for improvement.
Meng Lang pointed out several shortcomings.
”The lack of attractive female roles makes it less attractive to female audiences. We need to polish it up and add a core female match or hostess. ”
”The second is the final war, which is not handled well enough. Ono temple as a male master, the final battle can only be marginal ob? Is there a problem? ”
”But But he is not a knight
In the video call, Bai Cang said in surprise.
Ono temple is not a knight, and he can't change. The final battle, as a mortal, what qualification does he have to fight?
”I don't mean that!”
Meng Lang covered his forehead and said, ”Shisen, as the father of knights, is hard to change. I mean, let him help the knight win with the power of ordinary people. ”
Movie and TV drama commonly used bridge!
Like the leader of the transformers, Megatron is building a space bridge and eager to bring together the army of the dead in Cybertron. As a result, the space bridge drawing was photographed by Maggie with her mobile phone, and then destroyed
Through the intervention of writers, ordinary people can also decide the outcome of an epic war.
”I see!”
Bai Cang understood. After hanging up the video phone, he immediately summoned the scriptwriter to revise the script.
Meng Lang didn't care about him.
Anyway, there is Shisen sitting on the neon side. If baicang dares to mess around, Shisen will not agree. After all, the pseudonym used by the protagonist to contribute to the cartoon is also called Shisen.
Ace is still shooting
In order to pursue a better effect, Meng Lang called on his good brother Jin Liufu and designed a jewelry grade Aote ring for ace.
It's priceless!
At the beginning of the design, in order to let the Aote ring be accepted by more people, the designer of Jinliufu jewelry adopted the ”wedding ring” design.
It's a genius idea!
There is a common problem in Showa Altman's works, that is, the sense of existence of transfigures is not high.
From Wandai's public financial report, we can see that zhaohe'ao's puppet model actually sells well. The sales volume of the transformable device is completely crushed by the younger generation.
Aote ring is better. The worst thing is Eddie's light wand. It's too cold. Many fans of Eddie have forgotten the name of this transfigure.
Meng Lang wants to change that!
Although the shape of the original beta magic wand did not change, he added ”fingerprint unlocking” and ”beta particles” and other contents, making it famous at one stroke.
Saiwen's special glasses, Meng Lang retains the original shape. Only on the basis of the original version, the humble ”mirror leg” and ”lens replacement” were added, thus opening up the market.
Jack's oate bracelet, Pengda and Jinliufu entered the jewelry industry. Expand the audience of Aote transfiguration device from children to adults.
Ace's Aote ring, Meng Lang has not come up with the idea to change, Jin Liufu's designer sent him a big gift.
Make a wedding ring!
The wedding ring market has great potential. After all, there are people who register to get married every moment. Once you get married, you need to buy a pair of wedding rings.
What a wonderful implication!
”Bridegroom, bride, from the moment you put on the ring, your marriage has been blessed by the whole land of light. As a witness of your love, ace will give you the ability to communicate with each other. May you always be united and live up to each other.... ”
Not suitable for Chinese wedding?
What the hell are you talking about? It's not ”sent into the bridal chamber” by aute.
When the time comes, one should pay homage to the king of Austria, the other to the father, and the husband and wife should pay homage to each other. What's not appropriate?
Meng Lang thought it was very good!