Chapter 458 (1/2)

Zhu Cong talked on and on for half an hour.

Ye min looks at Zhu Cong and thinks: this man is really glib. With his virtue, he is likely to be a playful man who seduces women with sweet words.

Obviously, ye min's first impression of Zhu Cong is not very good.

”Brother Zhu, please give me some specific guidance. For example, when the country uncle in the novel goes to market town to sell vegetables, what should he say when he meets those city sisters who love to take advantage of the market, so as to portray his character?”

Zhu Cong pondered for a moment and said, ”you see, the uncle in the countryside has worked hard to grow some vegetables, and he has taken the burden to go to the market town for more than ten miles to sell vegetables. These vegetables are condensed with his sweat and hard work. However, the elder sisters in the city choose fat and thin, and they keep pushing down the price. One of them was walking away, And took a big radish. At this time, uncle should curse, he should curse like this: Damn, all these old women in the city are stingy

Ye min clapped his hands and said, ”yes, it's time to scold him. Only in this way can we show his rudeness and directness.”

Zhu Cong said with pride: ”this is called using language to depict character. In fact, to depict character is not only in language, but also in the description of the character's appearance or his actions.”

”Brother Zhu, I understand that we should depict the character from all aspects. Only in this way can the character be full and vivid.”

”By the way, you're so smart. I think you're a novelist.”

”Brother Zhu, you flatter me. I'm just a beginner. I hope you can always guide me and help me.”

”Ha ha... Let's help each other and improve together. I'm just a few years older than you, and I've been engaged in writing for a few more years. In fact, I think you have a great talent for writing. ”

Ye min murmured in his heart: ”of course, this novel is copied from a magazine. If people don't have any talent, can the novel be published in a magazine?”

”Brother Zhu, you flatter me. I want to worship you as a teacher.”

”Good.”

Zhu Cong was not modest at all. He immediately agreed.

He had a little fight in his heart. The girl was very beautiful and gentle. She was much better than the poodle.

Maybe it was God who cared for himself, who was mercilessly abandoned by shimaogou, and was wronged by an inexplicable girl, so he sent such a lovely girl.

”Miss, I forgot to ask your name.”

”My name is Ye min, you can call me Xiao Min later.”

”Xiaomin, I'm very happy to accept you as my apprentice. I hope we can work together on the road of literature and create a new era of literature.”

”Brother Zhu, today you gave me very good advice on this novel, which inspired me deeply. It can be said that listening to your words is better than reading for ten years. At noon today, I'd like to invite elder brother Zhu to dinner to show my intention as an apprentice. ”

”Well, I'll treat you to dinner. Since I'm a teacher, you have to listen to me.”

Zhu Cong is very happy, also very proud, he lost a domineering dog, but got a gentle Ye min, this is called: loss has gain.

At noon, Zhu Cong took Ye min to a small hotel near the cultural center.