145 Not Planned Well Enough (2/2)

[Organizing results.]

[Setting: 4/5

Characters: 4/5

Plot: 3/5

Overall rating: 3.7/5]

Su Yan's face lit up at the first two results. Achieving four of five points wasn't bad considering that the system had always found something until now and that this was only the second complete story he had thought up using the system. It really was a satisfactory result.

Unfortunately … He frowned when he saw the not so good result of the plot. Three points probably couldn't be considered bad but he still felt that he also deserved four points there. After all, what else could he have written down? There were a lot of the things that people loved about xianxia stories and he had even noted down that the main characters would fall in love while doing these things! What more did the system want?!

There was nothing he could do about it though. Well, maybe he could at least find some kind of explanation for that rating in the suggestions. Not reconciled with his result at all Su Yan read on:

[Evaluation: The host has managed to plan an outline that can be used to instantly begin writing a new story and introduce it to your audience. Not counting some minor issues the host's skill in planning a story can be considered satisfactory. Please try implementing the following suggestions for further improvement.

1) Finalize details regarding your setting like the name and other relevant information on important places.

2) Also think about the past of your characters to give them more depth.

3) Be as specific as possible in the description of your plot. Note down scenes that will influence the main plot of your novel. Important milestones of a relationship like the moment one of the two characters falls in love, their first kiss or their first night together should be included and linked to other events in the story.

Hint: Remember to adjust your outline to changes that may occur while writing your new story.]

Su Yan raised his brows. So the system wanted him to include even more details? He had actually felt that he had done enough in that regard. But, well, thinking about it now that might not be true.

The sect the two main characters were part of didn't have a name, neither did the peak that Ziju An led. He should have thought about such things. As for the backstory of the characters … He didn't really think that it was necessary. Ziju An was so old already. Was he really expected to plan all of that? It would be alright for Dou Fang Hai though. Mn, yes, he would do that when implementing the suggestions.

The last one was giving him a headache though. He had thought he had already planned the most important part and he had listed a few things he wanted to have in there. Why was the system still expecting more?

Argh, well, if it wanted him to … Grumbling, Su Yan went back to work and started editing his document. As soon as he came to the notes about the plot he noticed a problem though: He had honestly no idea when the things the system suggested would happen.

How was he supposed to know that?! He hadn't planned that much yet!

Suddenly, Su Yan realized that his system was actually right. He really … hadn't planned well enough.