88 A Brilliant Idea (1/2)
Su Yan couldn't believe what was going on. Somehow his life seemed to get more embarrassing with each passing hour. He fled back inside and took the seat at the counter over from Old Lao. Nie Chang came in behind him, the ordered food in his hands. He handed half of it over to Lao Lao and wanted to stay with Su Yan but his boyfriend heartlessly chased him away.
”Go, go! I have to work!” Su Yan pulled his notebook over while picking up his chopsticks with the other hand and opened the text editor again. He'd just concentrate on work, then Nie Chang wouldn't be able to do any more embarrassing things to him.
Nie Chang sighed, picked up his part of the food and bent down to Su Yan, giving him another kiss on the cheek. ”Alright. Then work hard. I'm in the back if you need anything.”
”Mn.” Su Yan just murmured but didn't look up so as to not give Nie Chang any ideas.
A few moments later, Nie Chang's steps slowly drew away. Su Yan took a relieved sigh. Being in a relationship wasn't all that easy.
For a while, he just ate his food and stared blankly at his text editor. He didn't manage to keep that up for long though. His thoughts automatically flew to the suggestions the Lovely Writing System had given him. He didn't know about the second and third yet but the first one was definitely something he could accept. In fact, the more he thought about it the more he felt like it was a brilliant idea to have the story develop in a more linear manner.
Ah, actually, his fingers were itching now.
Su Yan finally couldn't take it any longer. He put his chopsticks aside and started on a new first scene.
[Yun Bei Fen looked up at the bearded old man who was holding his hand with big eyes. ”Master …”
”Mn? What is it, Fen'er?” The man crouched down next to him and gave a brilliant smile that made him look ten years younger.
Yun Bei Fen pointed in front of them. Is that the sect you've talked about?”
His master nodded. ”It is. This will be your new home from now on. Don't worry, I'm sure you'll like it a lot.”
”Mn!” Yun Bei Fen smiled back. Since his father died he had been alone most of the time even though his uncle and his wife had taken him in. He felt lucky that this old grandpa had come by. Wouldn't it just be like having a family again?]
Su Yan paused. He hadn't really thought about it and just written whatever came to mind but right now he felt like he had had the best idea ever. Mentioning about Yun Bei Fen's family right at the beginning would explain his great relationship with his master and also why he was so intent to see Mei Chao Bing as part of his family later on. Hah! He really felt like a genius now.