Chapter 433 (1/2)

If you want the readers to trust you, it's because of fate. Since the readers choose you from the vast ocean of information, you must give them extra value in return, which is the basis of building trust.

Even if the final change of the article is general, but at least you can have a clear conscience, because you have tried your best.

After the initial revision, we can ensure that there are no major problems. This time you can see if there is room for optimization in terms of words and sentences, whether the words are easy to understand, whether there is a sense of substitution at the beginning, whether the title can be further optimized, and so on. ”

Wang Xiaochen quickly said: ”I'll go through tonight and write out the revised plan. I'll see how to do it tomorrow.”

Fang Tianxing said to him, ”yes, but we must keep the good parts and get rid of the bad ones. And we can make the main line more prominent, and the context of development more clear.... ”

Wang Xiaochen quickly said, ”I'll do it well and be responsible for my work.”

When Fang Tianxing went back to class, the students talked about what Fang Tianxing had done. Many people thought that Fang Tianxing had broken the rules of the perfect university and was a provocation to the authority.

Fang Tianxing's gambling fight a week later is a joke. A top student who works hard in perfect university can't compete with a poor student who is eliminated. Many people think that he is just beyond his ability. Fang Tianxing doesn't know if he can doubt these people. He just expects reality to shut them up.

After class, Tianxing comes to Wang Xiaochen, who has sorted out all his works.

The places to be modified are marked out. Fang Tianxing checks them one by one and gives his own modification opinions for each place.

Wang Xiaochen found that the points pointed out by Fang Tianxing were all his previous weaknesses, but he didn't expect Fang Tianxing to point out all of a sudden, which surprised him very much,

Fang Tianxing said to him: ”a text is a literary work only if it is read by readers in the world, because their opinions represent the so-called will of the world, and those who read your works are all people in the world after all. If you intend to ignore the world, the world will also ignore you.

Many problems, such as the back against the white wall, obviously stained with dust, they are difficult to find, but others can easily see.

For the problems pointed out by others, there is a principle of revision, that is, we must join our own thinking, not blindly cater to others.

However, thinking is indeed a very painful thing, even one of the heaviest burdens of human beings. Since it's so painful, why should we think about it? Because thinking is what makes us different from other animals.

Wang Xiaochen listened carefully to Fang Tianxing's opinions. Today, Fang Tianxing told him about the composition and plot structure.

After hearing this, he felt that his writing had just been enriched and his writing had become more exquisite.

Fang Tianxing said to him, ”knowledge must be used in order to play its role. We must work hard to find the best way to write in codewords.”

Wang Xiaochen has finished writing 10000 words today, but he knows that this is not enough. If he wants to be an excellent Internet author, he has to burn himself to the limit and bloom with unprecedented brilliance.

According to Fang Tianxing's instruction, Wang Xiaochen only felt that his coded words were becoming more and more exquisite. Compared with the earth shaking changes before, it was almost impossible to compare them with each other.