Chapter 72 (1/2)

Seeing Fang Tianxing by his side, Fang Tianxing said again. The old man by the river seemed to hear, ”is it your work that you want to comment on?”

”Yes, that's right. I want to ask the teacher to comment on my works, please.” Fang Tianxing said to the old man by the river in a respectful tone.

”Then you put out your words, use the true colors of the words, don't change, I'll help you to have a look.” The old man by the river said casually.

Fang Tianxing released all the words in his body. These days, Fang Tianxing's updating speed is faster and faster. His words have more than 70000.

More than 70000 characters are constantly changing outside Fang Tianxing's body, showing endless changes. Sometimes it's like changing clouds, sometimes it's like water.

When the old man saw Fang Tianxing's words, his eyes lit up. He began to observe Fang Tianxing's words carefully. As he looked at them, he uttered tut Tut's praise.

Fang Tianxing's writing is built under the guidance of the five supreme masters, with a solid foundation, which can be said to surpass most people's works. The structure of the characters is exquisite, but there seems to be something wrong. The characters can not be perfectly combined to give full play to their power.

”Your novel really surpasses most people, but the theme is not clear, and the plot is a little tardy.” The river side wild old man criticizes a way, tone is not polite, as his nickname is same.

Fang Tianxing is speechless. Even his novels under the guidance of the five supreme masters can say so many questions. This man is really amazing.

”But...” the old man said again.

”But what?” Fang Tianxing asked anxiously.

”But what your novels lack most is a soul, a real core soul.” The words of the old man by the river are amazing.

What does the lack of core soul mean? Fang Tianxing thought to himself. He immediately went to the thinking space and asked the five supreme.

Mengru Shenji is playing chess with Tang family sanshao. Tang family sanshao doesn't want to play chess with him at all. He waves his hand and says, ”I know you are very good at go. I don't want to play chess with you. Are you so bullying and so interesting?”

”San Shao, come and play. It's fun to play chess. Or I'll give you five more. ” Dream into Shenji hold Tang family three less hand, just don't let him leave.

Seeing Fang Tianxing coming, Tang family three young immediately asked: ”Tianxing, is there something wrong? I'll help you solve it.”

Tang family three little turned to dream into Shenji said: ”don't let go soon, Tianxing has a problem with me, I have to do business.”

After that, Tang family three little shake off the dream into the magic hand, went to Fang Tianxing, ”you say, what happened, I'll help you solve.”

”Master, it's like this. I went to WangWen university to participate in the youth training camp before. There was a young man named Jiangbian Yesou. He said that my words lack a core soul and I don't know what's going on. ” Fang Tianxing said to the Tang family.

”Well, I thought that your writing seemed to be wrong.” After pondering for a moment, Tang family three little said.

”Although your words can increase normally, there seems to be something missing. I don't know. It may have an impact on you to refine this life treasure book in the future. ” Tang Jia San Shao said.

”What is missing, what is missing?” Fang Tianxing said to himself.