Chapter 2 (1/2)

Chapter 2

Note: Our he shows up in this chapter! Still a lot of footnotes but less than in Chapter 1

Shen Yuan has never been able to understand why this extreqiu, has this kind of do-or-die attitude For what?

The original Shen Qingqiu’s family ell-off and he could at least be considered a s He has two older brothers ill inherit the faer sister that he loves Their feelings are very good

He already knew that even if he didn’t amount to much in life, he wouldn’t lack aenviron as the co ranked within the first ten is considered a good result to hie with those anted to doqiu has some skill and qualifications He also pretends to have e of reputation, no need to worry about money as a member of the world’s nuht with the grassroots protagonist, his brain working all day to calculate how to insult the protagonist and incite others to join in?

Even if Luo Binghe is a heaven-sent genius and incredibly powerful, to coree, right?

Still, you can’t bla so crummy In the novel, this kind of cru everywhere He is only one of est BOSS is the protagonist hiht shi+ne like the sun and the moon?

He won respect in the cultivation world because of his ‘Xiu Ya Sword,’ so his natural talent can’t be considered too bad

For now, Shen Qingqiu looks left and right, pleased even though his coe in the bronze mirror

This person’s appearance is neat with two black eyebrows and thin lips, born to look like a scholar Plus his triof2, this is a cultivation novel; Shen Qingqiu cultivated his inner strength and so he has perfectlybooks to fill his h there’s no way to cohe, Shen Qingqiu’s brain felt extreht now at the Luo Binghe who’s currently shut up in the woodshed, but before he can take a step, another alar! ‘Shen Qingqiu’ would not take the initiative to see Luo Binghe 】

Shen Qingqiu angrily said: ‘Fine Then I’ll send so hiht for aFan!”

Froe darted in, tall and thin, and said: “This disciple is here What is shi+fu‘s co another look at hi, just has a bit of a wretched appearance4 In his heart he laments: Turns out he’s a piece of cannon fodder5

This is the original Shen Qingqiu’s top disciple, Luo Binghe’s senior apprentice-brother Ming Fan

This is the legendary lowest level of cannon fodder!

Needless to say about shutting Luo Binghe out of the dor entry passwords, these kinds of things he all has a hand in Whenever Shen Qingqiu feels a deep grudge and wants to torture Luo Binghe, theFan

Knowing this person’s final ending, Shen Qingqiu looks at this child and feels quite a bit of ehe here”

Ming Fan’s heart thought: Why is shi+fu calling hihe, he always calls him ‘that small beast,’ ‘bastard,’ ‘mixed blood,’ ‘sprout,’6 and uses these na him so intimately?

But naturally he doesn’t dare to question his shi+fu‘s cos to the woodshed and kicks the door, yelling: “Coqiu paces in the roo the systeently answers hiher your points are, the better the work is 】

Then, hoould I raise points?

【1 Change the weak plot and fix the errors of the scu characters; 2 Avoid onist’s coolness; 4 Unravel secret scenarios 】

Shen Qingqiu analyzed everything deeply, one by one

That is to say: He not only has to whip the ass of the rotten piece of work that is the original Shen Qingqiu into shape, but also make sure the other characters don’t make a mess either;

He doesn’t even know if he can keep his own precious little life, but he still onist and his girls aren’t lacking;

Not only are the plot holes made by the author unfilled, he must personally shovel and top off those holes himself

Hehe

As Airplane Towards The Sky said, this novel “Proud Ioal Every word that is written is for one purpose, and that is coolness

Perhaps it’s after theinnocent, pretending to be the pig to eat the tiger,8 guarding against h to overturn the heavens That’s why the work becaer than its binding

So Shen Qingqiu thinks, but his task to clean up the plot reat Mines are buried all over, he cannot be certain that he’ll be able to avoid every single one!

Shen Qingqiu: ‘What kind of plot is considered not bad?’

【There is no standard, it depends upon the subjective feelings of the reader 】

‘This poor piece of writing still has a reader’ Shen Qingqiu snorted, co that he himself was someone who’d spent V realthe bridge of his nose, that he was that kind of ‘faithful’ reader……

Pausing, Shen Qingqiu then asked: ‘Then how e to start?’

System: 【It will be dictated by the specific circumstances When the requirements have beenthrough the proble bal the door, he stepped back and saw a boy walk through

Despite being uneasy, he still ht and say: “shi+zun”