Chapter 465: Path of ecchi (1/2)

Chapter 465: Path of ecchi

The time passed, and it was time to announce the review of Zaimokuza's manuscript

Zaiantly, and had full confidence over his manuscript

"" Everyone

Still, unlike the original, they spent two days reading Zaimokuza's manuscript, so they didn't feel sleepy and could read the his story in detail even if it was hard to read

While shi+shi+o, Yukinoshi+ta, and Hikigaya read Zaimokuza's manuscript until the end, Yui didn't seem to read it to the end since every tiet all sleepy However, no one bothered to talk to her since they knew this girl well

"Well then, I'd like to hear thine impressions now," Zaimokuza said

"I'm sorry I don't understand this kind of stuff" Even if shi+shi+o had explained to her, there were many parts of Zaimokuza's story that she didn't understand However, she kneas normal since even shi+shi+o was also confused in some parts of the story

"It matters not I'd like to hear the opinions of the commoners as well Say whatever you like!" However, Zai and asked, "Uhness" too?"

"Why do you have to call aze

"Ah, um" Zaimokuza was nervous, but he bit the bullet and asked, "You're dating Lelouch, right?" Yes, he started to call shi+shi+o by a Lelouch since he felt it was cool He was a master of the land of the sun, and shi+shi+o was a doendary

Zai Yukinoshi+ta a commoner, especially when she was shi+shi+o's queen

"" Hikigaya and Yui

"No, we're not dating" Yukinoshi+ta e at shi+shi+o, who chuckled with annoyance She then, without hesitation, twisted his waist, causing him to scream in pain

"Senpai, it hurts! Stop!"

When Yukinoshi+ta felt satisfied, she stopped and huaya, Yui, and Zaimokuza felt defeated somehow

"Ahem, let's discuss the manuscript first" shi+shi+o looked at Yukinoshi+ta and said, "Senpai, can you be the first one?"

"Okay" Yukinoshi+ta nodded while looking at Zaimokuza, aited for her review expectantly

While waiting for the result, Zai"

"" Zai this causedas one can think of"

"Gakuh!" Zai a pain that one couldn't iine He felt his entire tremble, and he didn't expect his opponent would attack hiinary blood on the corner of his ony expression and asked, "Just for reference, could I request that thee explain which part was boring?"

"First, the grammar is a mess Why do you always invert the word order? Do you kno to use particles? Were you not taught in elementary school?"

While Zaimokuza was heard, he tried to use his reason why he did all of that "Ugh Because rather than using a simple literary style, in order to reach the readers—"

"Aren't you supposed to be able to at least write using standard japanese before doing that?"

He couldn't finish his words, and he was cut by Yukinoshi+ta

"And about these readings, there are tooevery mistake that Zaimokuza had made Those words were like an arrow that pierced his entire body, turning hi He trembled, and the air tried to suffocate hi this witch

shi+shi+o didn't say anything and just closed his eyes like Yui, who also fell asleep in the middle of Yukinoshi+ta's review

On the other hand, Hikigaya had a cold sweat, wondering how the heck shi+shi+o could conquer this cruel wo people read an unfinished story?"

"Gaaaah!" Zaimokuza couldn't handle it anyet up since the dae caused by Yukinoshi+ta was ht

"Don't you think it is enough?" Hikigaya felt empathy toward Zaih, but okay" Yukinoshi+ta stopped talking, then looked at shi+shi+o, as sleeping, feeling annoyed, and twisted his waist again

"Ouch! Ouch! Senpai, why did you keep twisting h!" Zaied by Yukinoshi+ta's words, and he didn't want to be hurt by the rando couple If shi+shi+o and Yukinoshi+ta flirted in front of hiht cry While he knew a man shouldn't cry so easily, there was a time he wanted to cry, especially in front of shi+shi+o

"Then, the next is Yuigauess" Yukinoshi+ta also knew this wasn't a ti they needed to do

When Yui was called, she was startled and quite panicked "U-U at Zaimokuza "You sure know a lot of difficult kanji"

"Gaaaah!!!" Zai slashed with a sword

"It's your turn, boys!" Yui quickly said

"Senpai, you should go first" shi+shi+o kindly gave Hikigaya a chance to give his review

"Hachiaya hopefully He was like a thirsty man in the aya could be his oasis Unfortunately,

"So, where did you copy that?"