Chapter 3315 (1/1)

"Yes, at least let me pay attention to the deep meaning of the book from the fragrant content of Jin Ping Mei." Bai Wenbin smiled and scratched his head. "I won't read little yellow books again in the future."

Everyone laughed and benefited a lot from it.

Bai Wenli stood up and said excitedly, "then I'll go upstairs to get the manuscript. Mom and Dad, brother and sister, nephew, you can help me see. What's good, what's bad?"

"Good!" everyone is not sleepy at noon today. It's rare for a family to talk together calmly.

Bai Wenli wrote all novelettes, a total of three, one of about 100000 words. Every stroke was carefully written by Bai Wenli, and the manuscripts were copied by Bai Wenli.

Although it's not long, it won't be finished for a while.

"Don't worry. Take your time. Jingxuan, go up and rest. Don't be tired." although Bai Wenli hopes to get the evaluation of her family, she also knows that reading novels takes time, "Wenbin, you carry Jingxuan on your back."

"Good!" Bai Wenbin put down the manuscript and carried Bai Jingxuan back.

Bai Yixiu and sun Yingying also returned to the room. They were not sleepy. They continued to read the manuscript and finished reading the novel at 2:30 p.m.

"Tell me what you think." Bai Yixiu put the manuscript on the bedside table.

Sun Yingying chuckled, "the rhetoric is gorgeous. Sometimes the characters are described in a long paragraph. Although the words used are gorgeous, I don't want to see them. In addition, the plot structure is scattered, and the story is not progressive layer by layer, some are illogical."

Bai Yixiu said with a smile: "the writing is really boring. The writing technique is too deliberate, not concise, and the plot is not straightforward. If I were an editor, I would refuse the manuscript."

"That's what I say, but now our daughter wants to publish. If she wants to publish, she must be aware of her shortcomings and change them in order to make progress," Sun Yingying said, "The reason why she likes Shang Wenjun and even worships Shang Wenjun is that Shang Wenjun has published articles and poems in some magazines. If our daughter can also publish, it will prove that our daughter is better than Shang Wenjun. When she makes more and more achievements in literature, her eyes will be higher and farther. Naturally, she won't just stare at Shang Wenjun."

Bai Yixiu thought for a moment and felt that sun Yingying was right. "Yes, why don't we spend money on her publication?"

Sun Yingying glared at Bai Yixiu, "That's how you spoil children. How can children make progress? We should not only help Wenli find her own problems, but also encourage and create conditions to make her aware of her shortcomings, and then she can improve her efforts. Since the entity can't publish, we can first encourage Wenli to publish novels on the Internet. By the way, there are online novel websites now?"

Bai Yixiu thought carefully, but he didn't have the exact memory in this regard. "Now there are computers, and many Internet cafes are open, and the network will become more and more popular. There should be some."

Sun Yingying nodded. "In my memory, there is a website called starting point novel, which seems to have been established very early. Otherwise, go to the Internet bar to surf the Internet now? If there is, and Wen Li is willing to publish on the Internet, let's buy a computer for Wen Li, install the Internet and support her creation."

"OK!" Bai Yixiu nodded, "let's point out the shortcomings of her novels first."