Chapter 999: I will write (1/2)

Chapter 999 I will write

Gu Yundong's gaze swept across the four of them one by one, and after a while, he said in a low voice, "Then I...

"Tell me."

Even Shao Qingyuan looked at her earnestly. He himself thought this idea was a good idea, but if Yun Dong said no, he would quickly think about it.

Gu Yundong coughed lightly, "The story is fine, that's what it was written, it's not fascinating enough."

Dai Zhifu hurriedly leaned forward, "Where is not enough?"

"Uncle, our story is mainly for the common people. Most of the common people are illiterate. Even if they do, they cannot understand the words that are too profound, especially these verses. We can understand them, but the common people may not be able to hear them. Understand."

The story, of course, needs to be simple and straightforward, and it is a fuss.

"That makes sense."

Dai Zhifu nodded slightly, and then heard Gu Yundong say, "After all, this script is different from the article. In addition to being logically rigorous, the most important thing is to set suspense to catch people's attention, so that people can understand the next story. There are guesses and expectations for the plot. And the first sentence is especially important. It is best to be concise and straightforward, and directly hit the theme. The rhetoric is too gorgeous, which will make people drowsy.

Dai Zhifu, who felt that his first sentence was wonderfully written, "..."

Shao Qingyuan, who felt that Dai Zhifu wrote much better than himself, "..."

Feeling that the first sentence would definitely make the emperor happy, Mrs. Dai and Mr. Dai, "..."

The first sentence,   , seems, indeed, not concise enough.

Dai Zhifu felt that he had been hit. He took the sheets of paper, and after looking at them again, he suddenly felt dull.

He is also a person who can really listen to what he has to say, and immediately asks for advice with humility, "Then according to your opinion, how to write it?"