Chapter 571 - Myrcella Will Help Emmelyn (2/2)
Tides alreadyMyreen because King Alexander was very ill The people had not experienced seasons other than spring and summer for over a century
If they suddenly experienced winter because their king could no longer protect them, their lives would become really hard
"Your Grace, did you call me?" Tides's voice moved Maxim from his reverie The butler had arrived with two other servants
"Yes, Tides Loriel is injured Please help bring him back to his chamber and call our royal physician, Soren, to treat his wounds," Myrcella ordered the butler to take care of Maxim "And when Soren is done, ask him to come here I need him to check Emmelyn's condition"
Tides tilted his head and see E what happened to her that the queen wanted their physician to check on her Was Lady Eht to it"
He ordered the servants to carry Maxiot the royal physician to co Alexander's cha's illness
After she was alone with Emmelyn, Myrcella came to the bed and sat by the bedside Her heart ached for her She reht when she saw her husband and daughter with another woman
Maybe it was the straw that broke the ca herself to be strong for a long ti
"You are a good woman, my dear" Myrcella muttered sadly "I am sorry this happened to you"
Fro this chapter was SO HARD and it took me so many hours Maybe almost six hours?
To be honest, the last few chapters affecteddrained too That's the reason why I haven't been able to reply to your coet to them once I feel better
Please know I don't enjoy torturing characters or readers
If it was up to me, I would fast forward the story, make a short summary of what happened between Mars and Maxim, probably only two lines of how the war broke out and ended, and suddenly have E arms The end
However, that's not hoorks Everything that happened throughout the story is the result of the choices made by each character that affect the course of history in their world
For exaht about the second bounty from the moment he heard about it, he would have saved her from further pain and heartbreak, she would not feel so depressed and lose the will to live However, Maxim was stubborn and selfish and so he kept it to himself
I always have to switch hats and write what each character feels, thinks, and says when they encounter a certain situation, and those decisions would affect the chain of events that happen afterward
I don't 'kill' characters when they die in the story - they died because soh to kill them
However, so her characters", or "Author, haven't you tortured her enough? Please give her happiness already", or "My real life is hard, I come here to read happy stories to lift my mood, but this story only e several o when Emmelyn was still iree that that part was very hard to read and I know many readers dropped this book at that point Some returned, and e was frustrated by what happened and askedEmmelyn and end the stressful part immediately' because she couldn't take it anymore She said I was an e I don't control the story
It hurts to read the e, but I understand her frustration and I tried not to take it personally I thought maybe my explanation was not worded properly So, so
I do have control over the story
However, I can't write whatever I want because I have to stay faithful to each character's personality and how they would think and talk, and make a decision They cannot be OOC (out of character) just to expedite the plot Everything has to ed, there also has to be a logical reason for that to happen Let's see Gewen for exa a woed , he disliked Eood and Ellena is bad So, he changed his stance
Gewen thought Harloas ugly and compared her to a vicious bear when they first met, but now he loved her to bits because she turned into a beautiful baby, because deep inside Geas still a vain man who valued looks
I know theand I am excited to write the part I especially look forward to the super sweet reunion between Mars and Eet there, I have to write these difficult chapters leading to thaton and stay with me on this journey Trust me, the chapters that you found hard to read, I found theether