Chapter 149: Settling Conflicts (1/2)
Chapter Author Review After 150+ s
Author Review After 150+ Chapters
I’ve included this review here because it couldn’t fit the review section’s word count li away spoilers So please go through the entire review first before deciding to place your questions And kindly refrain fros happened to the novel since I wrote the first review for VEH First, it received a bronze price in WPC 218 Then it got contracted It’s about time I let the new readers knohat they can expect fro quality: I believe I have a sound sentence construction And I’uistic skills
Yes, there ht be some stray errors that I couldn’t catch till now,just some ATD errors But they won’t hamper your readability
Writers develop a blind spot for their work That’s they can’t serve as the best proofreaders for their novels Therefore, I request the readers to take up that role and point any error they do find so that we can fix theive this novel a professional edge it ives a unique take on an extre back in time Still, I’ve made sure to not take the beaten path and e or harem-centric story It has those moments, sure But collectively, it is much more than any of it’s aspects combined
The storyline is optiht argue that the storyline could be ree with them But the extended explanations I’ve included have saved the novel fro plot holes many ti it can be to find a mood killer plot hole that throws entire story into a disarray Therefore, I’ve ht descriptions depicting relevant world settings, things, people, and n: Eren Idril is a pathological liar and cunning uard so that he can deal with the his own interests are not hurt in the process Certain mishaps have happened to hied him to be the kind of person he is even in the current timeline Therefore, he’d always prioritize his benefits over blindsided revenge And he’d et the things or result he wants
If you are here for a an overpowered MC who goes through his obstacles like an unstoppable hurricane, you will be disappointed reading this piece But if you want to watch a cynic, bitter minded, two-faced, and coes with absolute prudence and OCDish preparedness, then this book here is your cup of tea
Updating stability: since the novel has gone premium, readers would be assured of stablized updates And I’ ifts, Golden Tickets, and any other forround: the novel world really starts to unfold after the end of volume 1 And expands extensively after chapter 100 VEH takes tiet
The cons:
1) the start of the novel has it’s info-dus in control but for a fresh novel to build up it’s lore, info-duues can be a bit stretched at first But that’s because I’ve tried to incorporate a lot of world-building information in theh Eren is polygaet inti them
4) the plotline is NOT mut centric The R18 scenes and other coive a breather to readers fro too much serious stuff all at once