Chapter 2：[Details] May 22, 2021 update (2/2)

Even though Jett has been very vocal, open, trustworthy, and honest, it probably still felt very lacking.

He's as impressionable as a thick, dull-colored wall. A wall that no one can see past or through.

While I tried to be more descriptive about his actions, there was still an absence when it came to the emotional component of it all.

I mention this as it's crucial for my readers to feel immersed in the story.

It's probably why I did not end up writing his POV yet. I, myself, felt like I didn't get to know him enough either. Ironically, that's coming from the one writing it! ME! ... Haha. :)

'Aight! Onto the next one!

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2.) [IMO, Chapter 1~10 was unbearably slow. Despite my clear intention to avoid this, most of those chapters STILL felt like they were full of info dumps!]

Yeaaaahhh, I know! These ten chapters were the worst. I know it's what deterred others from finishing this already short novel. Guys, you've no idea how badly I wanted to fix this—but I didn't want to spare the time to do so back then.

Anyway, I want to redo the first ten chapters and make it flow a whole lot better. I do want to add better transitions into the rest of the story as well.

Oh! And for the sake of transparency, I don't plan to increase the polished version's length substantially. The original (the one that's uploaded here in WN) is already around 43k+ words. It's just not meant to be a super long novel. Nor have I ever felt compelled to write for one story for too long.

This author of yours has severe ADHD, and if I get bored as I'm writing my novel... that'd... be... uh... bad—very, very, VERY bad! LOL! Good luck ever seeing the completed version from me, hahaha!

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3.) Uhhh... I completely forgot what my third point was. Oops. LOL! I think I've at least made sure to list all the major flaws. Of course, if there's anything else I could think of in the meantime, I'd make sure to correct it myself right away.