Chapter 395 (2/2)
”All in mind?” Yusheng looked at the reply of the black cat and looked at the manuscript at hand. This thick manuscript has at least 100000 words, of which nine are set. Yusheng suddenly feels that it is not a simple thing to give the black cat a suggestion for writing a novel.
So Yusheng has a headache and replies to the other party. ”In short, you should let the setting be less. It's best to integrate the setting perfectly into the plot of the novel. It feels like you have a delicious food. You feel a little curious. When you ask the boss, the boss jumps out to introduce the food to you. That's the feeling. Do you understand?”
”I'll try.”
Then Yusheng ended the call with the black cat with some uneasiness, praying that the other party could listen to his own opinions. Yusheng said he really didn't want to read the set again.
However, since he chatted with the black cat, Yusheng naturally thought of takasaka tongnai. He looked and found that the other party was just ahead, so he sent a message.
”Are you there?”
”Yes, what's up?”
”No, I just feel like I haven't been in touch for some time, so say hello.”
”Hehe, so you have nothing to do to harass me?”
For takasaka tongnai's reply, Yusheng is also covered with black lines.
”It's all right. I'll go.”
Looking at the other party's reply, Yusheng thought. He felt that it was a little boring to end the dialogue so simply. So after thinking about it, I was ready to ask takasaka tongnai about yarn fog.
”I want to consult you about something.”
”Oh? It's about my sister again? When can your novel be finished? I've been waiting for a long time.”
”The first draft of the novel has been prepared, but I'm not very satisfied, so it's under revision.”
”Oh, can you show me the first draft?”
”No!” for whom takasaka Tong depends on his love letter to shawu, Yusheng resolutely refused.
”Stingy. But what do you want to ask?”
”Well, if a girl likes reading novels like the Virgin Mary, do you think she will?”
”Absolutely like girls!!!” through three exclamation points, Yusheng seems to feel takasaka Tong's firm and positive attitude. Yusheng is more and more worried about yarn fog.
”Who is this girl who likes girls? It's someone you know.”
”No, I asked casually.” after several hidden events were discovered, Yusheng felt that girls had the potential to become famous detectives, so he resolutely refused to reveal too much.
”Hehe, I don't believe it.”
”But how are you doing? How are you doing?”
”That's it. Please be a good girl at school, play games and quarrel with that guy when you get home.”
Yusheng understands that the guy in takasaka Tong's mouth refers to the black cat. He can't help but move in his heart. He doesn't know whether takasaka Tong knows about each other's novel writing.