Chapter 680 (1/2)
”What?” Du Ziyuan looked innocent, as if he didn't understand what Cai Zishi was talking about.
This is the most irritating. People want to beat him.
However, Cai Zishi had no choice but to comment on him: ”I can only say that I am worthy of being a disciple of Mr. Shanfeng. I am impeccable in the creativity of the story, the exquisite degree of the picture and the development of the plot. The only regret is that I am in a hurry. Many details are not fully described. I think you can draw 200 pages of content in these 30 pages to make the development of feelings more natural, but considering that it is a 24-hour limit after all When creating, if you really want to refine, the integrity of the story can not be guaranteed, so this defect is understandable. ”
”Thanks for Director Cai's comments,” Du Ziyuan answered immediately. He said to Xia'an, ”Cai Daogang's words have been made very clear. Your painting skill is undoubtedly your greatest advantage. It's done well, and your sense of lens is also the best among all the disciples. Therefore, Cai Daocai didn't criticize in this regard, but it's still that problem. This competition doesn't restrict you to choose materials. It mainly depends on how you integrate yourself. You're obviously right The heart is too big. You just want to take out the good things, but you find that the time is too tight, so you can actually draw better on this subject. ”
”Thank you for your comments.” Xia'an bowed again.
Finally, Xia'an got 887 points from the audience and 100 points from the tutor. Du Ziyuan still didn't recognize it.
The yanlingtian on one side said: ”no, this level of work can't get 100 points from teacher Shanfeng? It's really strict.”
Du Ziyuan shook his head: ”I don't see how their works are, but what they have done in the past 24 hours. I know how many resources Xia'an has. It's really not enough for her to do so.”
Xia'an was too anxious. It was obvious that the setting, foreshadowing and climax of the sword God domain could not be contained in just 30 pages. She insisted that it could only affect the rhythm of the story, so Du Ziyuan didn't give a score.
Without Du Ziyuan's 100 points, Xia'an returned to her seat in some loss. It seemed that she was going to cry. Yan Lingtian immediately ran down to comfort his students, but Xia'an pushed her away.
This scene was naturally seen by Du Ziyuan: [shit, this yanlingtian doesn't want to abduct my disciple? How old is he?]
He suddenly had a feeling that ”he worked hard to raise his daughter to the age of 15, but suddenly a 40 year old uncle tried to steal vegetables”.
The key is that the uncle is so handsome, rich and famous. That's what the little girl can't resist.
[no, I have to discuss with frown when I go back. Should I break Yan Lingtian's leg or his trophy?]
Yan Lingtian, who was smiling awkwardly at Xia'an, suddenly felt a cold attack behind him and couldn't help shivering. ”Strange? Why did he suddenly have an ominous premonition?”
After Si Xingwei and Xia'an, it's yanlingtian's turn to come out first.
Their team sent an old man in his 60s, named Fangling. This man is also a wonderful flower in this competition. Other contestants are young and few are over 30 years old. However, he looks old and has been selected.
Du Ziyuan didn't know him, but according to Cai Zishi, Yanling Tianye, this one has made some achievements in the painting industry, but he didn't expect to change careers at his age.
Fang Ling has been painting ink and wash for most of his life. Naturally, his skills are not bad, but it is really difficult to change from ink and wash painting to general pen comics, so he simply didn't turn and directly used ink and wash to draw comics.
Ink painting can also draw fine brushwork naturally, and the painting style is also suitable for comics. It is this unique that makes him shortlisted 16 people.