Part 21 (1/2)

[Footnote 1: Fifth edition of Heyne's text, 1888.]

[Footnote 2: At this point Simons speaks as if ab, ab, were the common form of alliteration in Old English, whereas it is rather uncommon.]

STEINECK'S TRANSLATION

Altenglische Dichtungen (Beowulf, Elene, u.a.) in wortgetreuer Uebersetzung von H. Steineck. Leipzig, 1898, O. R. Reisland. 8vo, Beowulf, pp. 1-102.

Seventh German Translation. Line for line.

_Aim of the Volume, and Nature of the Translation._

'Die vorliegende Uebersetzung ist aus dem Bedurfnis einer wortgetreuen Wiedergabe altenglischer Denkmaler entstanden. Soweit es der Sinn zuliess, ist das Bestreben dahin gegangen, fur jedes altenglische Wort das etymologisch entsprechende neuhochdeutsche, wenn vorhanden, einzusetzen. So ist die Uebersetzung zugleich ein sprachgeschichtliches Werk.' --Vorwort.

_Text Used._

The translation is based on Heyne's text of 1863[1] (Vorwort).

Fragmentary pa.s.sages are not restored.

EXTRACT.

IX.

Hunferd sprach, des Ecglaf Sohn, 500 Welcher zu Fussen sa.s.s des Herren der Scyldinge; Er loste der Streiter Geheimniss--ihm war Beowulfs Fahrt, Des mutigen Meerfahrers, zu grossem Neid, Weil er nicht gonnte, da.s.s irgend ein anderer Jemals nun mehr Ruhmesthaten Unter dem Himmel der Erde erwarb als er selbst: 'Bist du Beowulf, der du mit Breca kampftest Auf weiter See in einem Wettschwimmen, Dort durchforschtet ihr beide aus Stolz die Fluten Und wagtet aus verwegener Ruhmsucht im tiefen Wa.s.ser Euer Leben? Euch beiden konnte keiner, 510 Weder Freund noch Feind, vorwerfen Die gefahrvolle Reise; da rudertet ihr beide im Wa.s.ser, Dort uberdecktet ihr beide den Wa.s.serstrom mit Armen, Ihr ma.s.st die Meeresstra.s.sen, mit Handen schw.a.n.gt ihr, Ihr glittet uber die Flut; das Meer wallte in Fluten, Des Winters Gewoge; ihr muhtet euch in des Wa.s.sers Gewalt Sieben Nachte ab; er besiegte dich beim Schwimmen, Er hatte grossere Kraft. Da warf ihn in der Morgenzeit An das Headoraemenland die See, Von dort aus suchte er das traute Stammgut auf, 520 Der seinen Leuten Teure, das Land der Brondinge, Die schone Friedensburg, wo er Volk besa.s.s, Burg und Ringe. Alles, wozu er sich dir verpflichtete, Leistete der Sohn Beanstans wahrhaftig.'

_Criticism of the Translation._

It would be manifestly unfair to criticize this translation for its want of grace and melody, because it is avowedly a literal rendering, and a literal rendering makes no attempt to attain these qualities. But there are certain things which are indispensable in a good literal translation. It is imperative that such a translation should be based on the best text of the original poem. What has Steineck done? He has gone back thirty-five years and chosen an early and inaccurate edition of a work that has been five times re-edited, Heyne's text of 1863! It seems almost incredible that a German, living in the midst of scholars who have done more than any other people to interpret the _Beowulf_, should ignore the fruits of their efforts.

It is unnecessary to enumerate the faults of this translation due to dependence upon an antiquated edition of the text. Suffice it to say that when the edition of 1863 was printed the text had not yet been properly transcribed from the MS.[2]

But there are evidences of an inaccuracy of a different kind that betray a carelessness utterly reprehensible. The author is apparently unable to transliterate properly the Old English names. Thus he has Vealhpeon and Vealhpeo (for Wealhtheow), Ecgpeow, Halbdaene (for Healfdene), Ermanarich, &c.

In his attempt to produce an etymological doc.u.ment, the translator uses many compounds such as even the German language might be better without; such are--Sippenschar (sibbegedriht), 730; Schattenwandler (sceadugenga), 704; w.a.n.genpolster (hleor-bolster), 689; Leibpanzer (lic-syrce), 550. As compounds these may not be offensive to a German; but the trouble with them is that they do not translate the Old English ideas.

Finally, it may be asked why a translation that appeals only as a literal rendering should not be strictly literal, noting its every variation from the original, italicizing supplied words, holding to the original word-order.

Steineck's translation did not advance the interpretation of _Beowulf_ a whit. In point of accuracy the book is not worthy to stand with good translations thirty years old.

[Footnote 1: See supra, p. 64.] [[Heyne: Relation of...]]

[Footnote 2: See also supra, p. 8.] [[Preliminary Remarks]]