Chapter 715 - An Average Persons Intelligence (2/2)

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An unlikable protagonist was one issue An unoriginal setting was another Sophisticated writing had succeeded at nothing but bringing out the deepest and darkest fears of a reader It was not the pleasant thrill one got fro horror On the other hand, the personalities and skillsets of the protagonist's nuettable

If a work like this received aAfter all,characters

Zhao Youyue gave Professor Chen her genuine thoughts on the latter chapters of the novel She surreptitiously followed up with soonist ”I aonist is bad However, we can't deny that they are no longer in-trend You don't have to scrap him, you could probably insert another character inside to co Zhou Squad” [3] would share the spotlight aht just be the last brick that needs placing”

At first, Professor Chen did not take Lady Zhao's advice to heart She was sure that a reader, even Lady Zhao would never be able to sway her principles However, Zhao Youyue's sincerity and in-depth analysis of her work had touched her

Therefore, Professor Chen asked curiously, ”In what shape and form would this final brick take?”

Zhao Youyue responded as if she had long anticipated this question She responded with the fluidity of a well-rehearsed presentation ”Of course, let's have a wisethe voice of wisdo in the novel When one happens, and it will, we can't have everyone rushi+ng in like ist, a forths of the weakest link into account Every squad must have a leader And every leader must have a wise advisor!”

This tih She had already considered introducing a 'wise'-styled character to the a ”Death Note” and had planned to use two of its wise characters as references However, she did not think of placing the wise character at the onist's side

Professor Chen felt that Lady Zhao's words ise and true

”Her nae intelligence… at best…” Zhao Youyue said pleasantly

Translation note:

[1] ”a man's naood reputation, it is akin to a tree having shadows The person with a good reputation would be able to utilize his reputation to protect hiive shade to soin Mary” (圣母) is a term which refers to characters that are friendly on the surface, but is actually a stubborn character that would pit her friends against each other

[3] ”Zhong Zhou Squad” (中洲队) is from the book ”Infinite Terror” by zhttty (a web novelist) It consists of 19 members who could reincarnate themselves when they die