Chapter 1416 (1/2)
”At the beginning, there were few changes, mainly because the plot of female anchor Lulu changed greatly.”
”Tell me.”
”The originally designed character will have more pen and ink. She is one of the important companions around the protagonist in the early stage. She describes how she learned to survive from a timid girl who just entered the end of the world and slowly grew into a strong person.”
”But when she didn't wake up Liu Qian and pan Hua in time because she was afraid on the balcony, the book review area brushed the screen and scolded the girl as a pig and abandoned the book if she didn't die. At that time, she quickly changed the plot, asked the protagonist to throw her and pan Hua away, and then prepared to give a plot for them to get a box lunch.”
”At this time, many readers asked to keep people under the knife in the book review area. They didn't want to see Lulu die. They said that Lulu would abandon the book when Lulu died, so they had to change the plot and bring her back to life, killing pan Hua. Anyway, no one cares about Pan Hua's life or death.”
”Considering that Lulu was very unpopular at first, but had a certain number of fans, she arranged for the protagonist to teach her some survival skills and abandoned her. All the scenes originally designed for her were deleted.”
”This change made her story inexplicable and unsatisfying at both ends, which became the biggest failure at the beginning of the book.”
”In fact, what I want to say is that after the end of the world, an ordinary girl in the real world can't be as omnipotent and calm as the protagonist Liu Qian at the beginning, but readers don't give these people the opportunity to grow.” The author shook his head.
Liu Qian didn't say a word for a long time. He couldn't believe that Lulu's fate had such twists and turns. He couldn't believe that the reason why he abandoned Lulu and pan Hua was so absurd!
”Are there any similar changes later?” After a while, Liu qiancai asked the author again.
”Yes, another character with great changes is Zhang Shengli. Originally, he received a boxed lunch after being stabbed by a wooden spear, but a large number of readers in the book review area scolded the protagonist as the Tiansha lone star. Who met who died and said that if he wrote like this, he would abandon the book. Therefore, he had to write him alive again.” After thinking about it, the author answered Liu Qian.
Liu Qian shook his head, feeling worse and worse in his heart.
”Speaking of this book, the biggest changes are not these.” The author looked at Liu Qian carefully.
”Oh? What's that?”
”The initial outline layout of thriller world has 10 million words. The first stage is composed of tranquility City, permafrost City, kuangsha City, Luyuan City, Huoyan City, huangbi city and the main urban area. The content of each part here is about one million words.”
”Tranquility city is covered with clouds, frozen soil city is covered with ice and snow, kuangsha city is covered with flying sand and rocks, Lvyuan city is like spring all the year round, Huoyan city is melting with fire, and huangbi city has all kinds of Gobi caves. The main urban area integrates all their characteristics.”
”In the original outline, the protagonist will visit six isolated island cities, experience different natural landscapes and different kinds of zombies in each isolated island city, gather six scepters to reach the main urban area, and enter the energy world from the space laboratory in the main urban area. The energy world is about 2 million words, and finally the universe, about 1 million words, a total of 10 million words.”
”Why is there only the content of quiet city and frozen soil city? What about the content of several other isolated island cities?” Liu Qian was inexplicably upset. He didn't believe that what he had experienced was designed by the obscene man in front of him, but after hearing what the man said, he had to doubt that the truth behind the scenes was indeed so.
”Zombie apocalypse novels are difficult to write long, because when the protagonist is weak, people will have the sense of oppression and tension of the Apocalypse; but if the protagonist does not grow and become stronger, it will soon annoy the readers and feel uncomfortable.”
”When the protagonist of the novel is extremely powerful and plays the unparalleled game of killing zombies, the novel can't be written down. If it is written down again, it is a repeated unparalleled game, which will be scolded by readers, such as running accounts and irrigation. Therefore, I designed the front outline to let the protagonist be completely washed and restarted every time he enters a new island city, so as to continue the zombie doomsday novel A sense of tension and oppression. ”
”However, the design of the washing point in permafrost City annoyed many readers. They scolded in the book review area, and the subscription decreased seriously. It is estimated that according to the original outline, after walking through permafrost City, if I finish all the washing points in kuangsha City, Luyuan City, Huoyan City, huangbi City and the main urban area, I will be scolded to death, so the following isolated island cities and main urban areas jumped over and directly entered permafrost city Quantify the world. ”
”On the one hand, readers want the tension and oppression of zombie apocalyptic novels, on the other hand, they also want the pleasure of the protagonist becoming stronger and stronger. These two points are really difficult to achieve. At least I can't find a way to achieve both. No matter how I write, both ends are not pleasing.”
”In order to increase the interest of the story, in the process of upgrading and strengthening the protagonist, I took great pains to design some plots such as screaming zombies, nightmare jellyfish and six brothers and sisters. I designed them very carefully and thought they would be wonderful.”
”But the fact is that these plots are the most scolded and subscribed chapters in the book. Half of the nightmare jellyfish is scolded and can't be written down, so they can only end in advance. The plot of the six brothers and sisters is written strongly against the curse, and the subscription is in a mess, which makes me feel very failed and disappointed.”
”When I write novels, I don't like to write unchanging things. I like to constantly seek innovation and change, and add various elements. Every story wants to have a big brain hole, giving people a fresh and strange feeling, but most readers don't adapt to and don't accept this writing method. They only like the single upgrade and strange, from weak to strong, and finally unify the universe.”
”I remember when the plot of tranquility city ended and the plot of permafrost city began, there were a large number of book reviews in the book review area, saying that they couldn't understand what the author was writing, and then scolded and abandoned the book. Later, every time I asked for innovation and change, there would be scolding and abandoning the book in the book review area, and it was really helpless for full subscription readers.”
”Horror novels are the type I'm best at. However, the current generation of readers who read novels are so timid that I can't imagine. As long as some horror content is slightly involved, the subscription will be lost without discussion, which makes me have to control the degree of plot terror. In the later stage, it's simply not involved, and a lot of modifications and adjustments have been made in this regard.”