Part 10 (1/2)
The periodic pattern of Guy de Maupa.s.sant was sedulously copied by O.
Henry; but this popular contributor to the American magazines went even further than his master and developed a double surprise to be delivered suddenly at the conclusion of the narrative. A typical example of his work is ”The Gift of the Magi,” wherein an unexpected outcome is immediately capped by a second outcome still more unexpected. The success of O. Henry with the reading public may be attributed mainly to his cleverness in taking full advantage of the powerful expedient of emphasis by terminal position. His technical adroitness may be studied best by reading rapidly the final paragraphs of any hundred of his stories. He had the happy faculty of saying last the best and brightest thing he had to say.
=2. Emphasis by Initial Position.=--Next to the last position, the most emphatic place in a brief narrative, or section of a narrative, is of course the first. The mind of the reader receives with an especial vividness whatever is presented to it at the outset. For this reason it is necessary in the short-story, and advisable in the chapters of a novel, to begin with material that not only is inherently essential, but also strikes the key-note of the narrative that is to follow. Edgar Allan Poe is especially artistic in applying this principle of emphasis by initial position. We have already quoted, in another connection, the solemn opening of ”The Fall of the House of Usher,” with its suggestion of immitigable gloom of setting as the dominant note of the narrative. In ”The Cask of Amontillado,”
wherein the thing to be emphasized is the element of action, Poe begins with this sentence: ”The thousand injuries of Fortunato I had borne as I best could; but when he ventured upon insult, I vowed revenge”: and we know already that the story is to set forth a signal act of vengeance. In ”The Tell-Tale Heart,” which is a study of murderous madness, and deals primarily with the element of character, the author opens thus:--
”True!--nervous--very, very dreadfully nervous I had been and am; but why _will_ you say that I am mad? The disease had sharpened my senses--not destroyed--not dulled them. Above all was the sense of hearing acute. I heard all things in the heaven and in the earth. I heard many things in h.e.l.l. How, then, am I mad? Hearken! and observe how healthily--how calmly I can tell you the whole story.”
=3. Emphasis by Pause.=--In general it may be said that any pause in a narrative emphasizes by position whatever immediately precedes it, and also (though to a considerably less extent) whatever immediately follows it. For this reason many masters of the short-story, like Daudet and de Maupa.s.sant, construct their narratives in sections, in order to multiply the number of terminal and initial positions.
Asterisks strung across the page not only make the reader aware of the completion of an integral portion of the story, but also focus his attention emphatically on the last thing that has been said before the interruption. The employment of _points de suspension_--a mark of punctuation consisting of a series of successive dots ...--which is so frequent with French authors, is a device which is used to interrupt a sentence solely for the sake of emphasis by pause.
=Further Discussion of Emphasis by Position.=--The instances which we have selected to ill.u.s.trate the expedient of emphasizing by position have been chosen for convenience from short-stories; but the same principle may be applied with similar success in constructing the chapters of a novel. Certain great but inartistic novelists, like Sir Walter Scott, show themselves to be singularly obtuse to the advantage of placing emphatic material in an emphatic position. Scott is almost always careless of his chapter endings: he allows the sections of his narrative to drift and straggle, instead of rounding them to an emphatic close. But more artistic novelists, like Victor Hugo for example, never fail to take advantage of the terminal position.
Consider the close of Book XI, Chapter II, of ”Notre Dame de Paris.”
The gypsy-girl, Esmeralda, has been hanged in the Place de Greve. The hunchback, Quasimodo, has flung the archdeacon, Claude Frollo, from the tower-top of Notre Dame. This paragraph then brings the chapter to an end:--
”Quasimodo then raised his eye to the gypsy, whose body he saw, depending from the gibbet, shudder afar under her white robe with the last tremblings of death-agony; then he lowered it to the archdeacon, stretched out at the foot of the tower and no longer having human form; and he said with a sob that made his deep chest heave: 'Oh! all that I have loved!'”
A chapter ending may be artistically planned either (as in the foregoing instance) to sum up with absolute finality the narrative accomplishment of the chapter, or else, by vaguely foreshadowing the subsequent progress of the story, to lure the reader to proceed. The elder Dumas possessed in a remarkable degree the faculty of so terminating one chapter as to allure the reader to an immediate commencement of the next. He did this most frequently by introducing a new thread of narrative in a phrase of the concluding sentence, and thereby exciting the reader's curiosity to follow up the thread.
The expedient of emphasis by terminal and by initial position cannot, of course, be applied without reservation to an entire novel. The last chapter of a novel with a complicated plot is often of necessity devoted to tying or untying minor knots in the straggling threads of the general network. Therefore, the most emphatic place in an extended narrative is not at the very end, but rather at the close of the chapter which sets forth the culmination. Also, although many great novels, like ”The Scarlet Letter,” have begun at an emphatic moment in the plot, many others have opened slowly and have presented no important material until the narrative was well under way. ”The Talisman” of Scott, ”The Spy” of Fenimore Cooper, and many another early nineteenth-century romance, began with a solitary horseman whom the reader was forced to follow for several pages before anything whatever happened. Latterly, however, novelists have learned from writers of short-stories the art of opening emphatically with material important to the plot.
=4. Emphasis by Direct Proportion.=--Another means of emphasis in narrative is by proportion. More time and more attention should be given to essential scenes than to matters of subsidiary interest. The most important characters should be given most to say and do; and the amount of attention devoted to the others should be proportioned to their importance in the action. Becky Sharp stands out sharply from the half a hundred other characters in ”Vanity Fair,” because more time is devoted to her than to any of the others. Similarly, in ”Emma”
and in ”Pride and Prejudice,” as we have noted in the preceding chapter, the heroine is in each case emphasized by the fact that she is set forth from a more intimate point of view than the minor people in the story. It is wise, for the sake of emphasis by proportion, to draw the major characters more completely and more carefully than the minor; and much may therefore be said, on this ground, in defence of d.i.c.kens's habit of drawing humanly only the leading characters in his novels and merely sketching in caricature the subsidiary actors.
=5. Emphasis by Inverse Proportion.=--It is sometimes possible, in special cases, to emphasize ironically by inverse proportion. An author may deliberately devote several successive pages to dwelling on subsidiary matters, only to emphasize sharply a sudden paragraph or sentence in which he turns to the one thing that really counts. But this ironical expedient is, of course, less frequently serviceable than that of emphasis by direct proportion.
=6. Emphasis by Iteration.=--Undoubtedly the easiest means of inculcating a detail of narrative is to repeat it again and again.
Emphasis by iteration is a favorite device of d.i.c.kens. The reader is never allowed to forget the catch-phrase of Micawber or the moral look of Pecksniff. In many cases, to be sure, the reader wishes that he might escape the constantly recurrent repet.i.tion; but d.i.c.kens occasionally applies the expedient with subtle emotional effect. In ”A Tale of Two Cities,” for example, the repeated references to echoing footsteps and to the knitting of Madame Defarge contribute a great deal to the sense of imminent catastrophe.
Certain modern authors have developed a phase of emphasis by iteration which is similar to the employment of the _leit-motiv_ in the music-dramas of Richard Wagner. In the Wagnerian operas a certain musical theme is devoted to each of the characters, and is woven into the score whenever the character appears. Similarly, in the later plays of Henrik Ibsen, certain phrases are repeated frequently, to indicate the recurrence of certain dramatic moods. Thus, in ”Rosmersholm,” reference is made to the weird symbol of ”white horses,” whenever the mood of the momentary scene foreshadows the double suicide which is to terminate the play. Students of ”Hedda Gabler” need not be reminded of the emphasis flung by iteration on the phrases, ”Vine-leaves in his hair,” ”Fancy that, Hedda!”, ”Wavy-haired Thea,” ”The one c.o.c.k on the fowl-roost,” and ”People don't do such things!” The same device may be employed just as effectively in the short-story and the novel. A single instance will suffice for ill.u.s.tration. Notice, in examining the impressive talk of the old lama in Mr. Kipling's ”Kim,” how much emphasis is derived from the continual recurrence of certain phrases, like the ”Search for the River,” ”the justice of the Wheel,” ”to acquire merit,” and so forth.
A narrative expedient scarcely distinguishable in effect from simple iteration is the device of parallelism of structure. For example, in Hawthorne's story of ”The White Old Maid,” the first scene and the last, although they are separated in time by many, many years, take place in the same s.p.a.cious chamber, with the moonbeams falling in the same way through two deep and narrow windows, while waving curtains produce the same ghostly semblance of expression on a face that is dead.
=7. Emphasis by Ant.i.thesis.=--Emphasis in narrative is also attained by ant.i.thesis,--an expedient employed in every art. In most stories it is well so to select the characters that they will set each other off by contrast. In the great duel scene of the ”Master of Ballantrae,” from which a selection has been quoted in a previous chapter, the phlegmatic calm of Mr. Henry is contrasted sharply with the mercurial hot-headedness of the Master; and each character stands forth more vividly because of its opposition to the other.
Of the two women who are loved by t.i.to Melema, the one, Tessa, is simple and childish, the other, Romola, complex and intellectual.
The most interesting stories present a constant contrast of mutually foiling personalities; and whenever characters of varied views and opposing aims come n.o.bly to the grapple in a struggle that vitally concerns them, the tensity of the situation will be augmented if the difference between the characters is marked. This expedient is therefore of especial importance in the drama. Oth.e.l.lo seems more poignantly emotional in the presence of the coldly intellectual Iago. In ”The School for Scandal,” Charles and Joseph Surface are much more effective together than either of them would be alone. The wholehearted and happy-go-lucky recklessness of the one sets off the smooth and smug dissimulation of the other; the first gives light to the play, and the second shade. Hamlet's wit is sharpened by the garrulous obtuseness of Polonius; the sad world-wisdom of Paula Tanqueray is accentuated by the innocence of Ellean. Similarly, to return to the novel for examples, we need only instance the contrast in mind between Sherlock Holmes and Dr. Watson, the contrast in mood between Claude Frollo and Phoebus de Chateaupers, the contrast in ideals between Daniel Deronda and Gwendolen Grandcourt.
The expedient of ant.i.thesis is also employed effectively in the balance of scene against scene. The absolute desolation which terminates ”The Masque of the Red Death” is preceded by ”a masked ball of the most unusual magnificence.” In Scott's ”Kenilworth,” we pa.s.s from the superb festivities which Leicester inst.i.tutes in honor of Queen Elizabeth, to the lonely prison where Amy Robsart, his discarded wife, is languis.h.i.+ng. Victor Hugo is, in modern fiction, the greatest master of ant.i.thesis of mood between scene and scene. His most emphatic effects are attained, like those of Gothic architecture, by a juxtaposition of the grotesque and the sublime. Often, to be sure, he overworks the ant.i.thetic; and entire sections of his narrative move like the walking-beam of a ferry-boat, tilting now to this side, now to that. But in spite of his excess in employing this device, his practice should be studied carefully; for at his best he ill.u.s.trates more convincingly than any other author the effectiveness of emphasis by contrast.
The subtlest way of employing this expedient is to present an ant.i.thesis of mood within a single scene. Dame Quickly's account of Falstaff's death touches at once the heights of humor and the depths of pathos. At the close of ”Mrs. Bathurst,” the tragic narrative is interrupted by the pa.s.sage of a picnic-party singing a light love-song. Shylock, in his great dialogue with Tubal, is at the same moment plunged in melancholy over the defection of his daughter and flushed with triumph because he has Antonio at last within his clutches. Each emotion seems more potent because it is contrasted with the other. In Mr. Kipling's ”Love-o'-Women,” the tragic effect is enhanced by the fact that the tale is told by the humorous Mulvaney.
Thus:--
”'An' now?' she sez, lookin' at him; an' the red paint stud lone on the white av her face like a bull's-eye on a target.
”He lifted up his eyes, slow an' very slow, an' he looked at her long an' very long, an' he tuk his s.p.a.che betune his teeth wid a wrench that shuk him.
”'I'm dyin', Aigypt--dyin',' he says; ay, those were his words, for I remimber the name he called her. He was turnin' the death-color, but his eyes niver rowled. They were set--set on her. Widout word or warnin' she opened her arms full stretch, an' 'Here!' she sez. (Oh, fwhat a golden mericle av a voice ut was.) 'Die here,' she sez; an'
Love-o'-Women dhropped forward, an' she hild him up, for she was a fine big woman.”