Vol 1 Chapter 1 (1/2)
Chapter 01: a.s.sault in the street
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Even close to the outskirts of Beijing city, all the streets are crowded without end. Ye Tian Xie was walking alone in the midst of streams of people with both of his hands inside his trousers pocket. His head was slightly lowered to look at the foot on the ground. His gaze was careless and sloppy and was not looking in front, still no one was colliding with him. Blue check s.h.i.+rt, obviously somewhat old-fas.h.i.+oned black color slim fit trousers, a pair of azure color slippers under his foot and whole body emitted relaxed and unruly aura like he was in his own house. Even so that temperament unconsciously attract many sidelong glances of girls repeatedly.
Today was the 60th day of distribution of gaming console of <destiny>. Also today at 12 in the afternoon will be the official opening of <destiny>, and now it was 9.
Although it was 60th day of distribution, there was still a long queue of people. Ye Tian Xie already expected this, and he queued at the rear of the line. The crowd scale of today couldn’t be compared to the crowd scale of the 1st month. The crowd of that month couldn’t even be described in any languages. There were not many people who was able to have patience like him to wait until today.
He lift his head to see blue and white sky as well as right in the middle of the sky that long mark——-that long white colored mark just like rift opened by cutting. Hundred years ago after it suddenly appeared within the sky, once initiate the global range of turmoil as well as numerous speculation was made, but with the time, all people cope with this mark in the sky and gradually upgraded to become used to it. Now the flawless azure blue sky above without any mark only exist in phonographs which is more than hundreds of years old.
“Ni hao, Mister! Please provide your DNA sample.” The receptionist gave him a professional smile and wait for his reply. Ye Tian Xie corner of the mouth slightly hooked up and started to appreciate the sight of this young lady. Appreciating the beautiful female is the biggest enjoyment of all the males and Ye Tian Xie was not an exception.
His undisguised aggressive gaze caused the female who had dealt with different kind of people every day to lose her calm and caused her heartbeat accelerate. His that pupil of two eyes appeared dangerous and profound. It was like a bottomless chasm and like the act of the G.o.d involuntary want to sink in that abyss….
A single hair lied on the center of palm of Ye Tian Xia. He extend his hand forward which caused the absent minded young girl to wake up. Now she didn’t dare to look at his eyes again. With obvious uncomfortable look she picked up the hair from his palm. While picking up that hair her fingers b.u.mp into his gentle hand, in this brief contact, something peculiar expand in her heart.
He is a dangerous person………a voice from her heart told her. Still she could not calm down and her heartbeat was still rising. She didn’t dare rise her head, she fiddle around with the equipment to cover up her panic, “What kind of equipment do you need…………hanging ornament type or wristband type.”
Genuine virtual games spring up at the end of 21st century but the development finally reached the pick only at 22nd century. Virtual helmets and virtual boxes are the mother and father of the virtual games. Currently on 23rd century, virtual games finally made another completely new breakthrough…….that was to have virtual reality comparable to real reality in every way which was <destiny>. Just the looks alone of this console was way better than previous virtual helmet and virtual box. It can be hang in the neck like ornaments or wear in your fingers or wrist like rings or bracelets. To operate this new console there was no need of other miscellaneous, heck it didn’t even need electricity or batteries. According to government explanation, inside equipment there is enough pre-installed power supply to operate it for more than 50 years. According to personal preference, there is freedom to choose any kind of virtual reality console. But they can only choose one per person which should be banded with their own DNA.
Even more insane is that all this VR gaming console was distributed freely.
Ye Tian Xie use his hands to pull off the cloth from his neck and his long and slender body became visible. Only then, that young girl notice, an unusual pitch-black ornament hanging in front of his chest. It was long and narrow with strange appearance having small irregular unanimous 7 holes. Not to know whether it is illusion but it seems to be s.h.i.+ning, she saw extremely weak different rays of light from each holes. It seems to be red, orange, yellow, green, cyanine, purple and white color.
“Mister, please……please wait a moment.” Finally young girl became aware that she was being absent minded again. She led him to enter the instrument with red face and unnatural movement. Her controlling device screen displayed the information which she remember in her mind. Only then she press down the red b.u.t.ton to complete the binding process. After that she hand over a black wrist band and a single visiting card to Ye Tian Xie and said, “Mister, this is your equipment, please take it. I wish you a happy gaming. This is my branch office visiting card. If you have any query then you are welcome to consult with us any time.”
Ye Tian Xie slowly extend his left hand, however he didn’t take it. The young girl gather her courage and finally raised her head. The gaze of that two pupil of his eyes and the face with glamour of evil monster and the response he gave cause her heartbeat yet again to accelerate: “Charms Jasmine of illusion, side by side perfect harmonious mix of Jasmine, Roses and lily gives pure smell of soft elegant making people bewitched, careful elegant young lady. This kind of girl is bestowed to the human world by G.o.d. Unknowingly I have been honored to let her get me this black ring.”