Part 9 (1/2)

For newspaper purposes this method is desirable because it makes a good lead. That is, the first paragraph, and if possible the first sentence, tells the biggest fact about the case. Readers'

attention being thus caught and economized, they get the habit of buying papers.

VII. a.s.signments

1. Write headlines for the models in this chapter.

2. Rewrite the Models in Section II on the plan of that in Section V.

3. Rewrite on the same plan one of Poe's other detective stories, one of Conan Doyle's Sherlock Holmes tales, Stevenson's _Dr.

Jekyll and Mr. Hyde_ or _The Wrecker_, one of Cooper's novels, or any other thrilling story.

VIII. Cautions

1. Be sure that you have your three situations in the right order.

2. Be exceedingly particular about the Four W's. Make them stand out vividly in each situation.

3. Use the shortest words that will convey your meaning.

4. Use adjectives and adverbs sparingly. How many does the model contain?

IX. Suggested Reading

Jules Verne's _Mysterious Island_; Robert Browning's _Herve Riel_; Tennyson's _Revenge_; Whittier's _Barbara Frietchie_; Samuel Rogers's _Ginevra_.

X. Memorize

THE WAR-SONG OF DINAS VAWR

The mountain sheep are sweeter, But the valley sheep are fatter; We therefore deemed it meeter To carry off the latter.

We made an expedition; We met an host and quelled it; We forced a strong position, And killed the men who held it.

On Dyfed's richest valley, Where herds of kine were browsing, We made a mighty sally, To furnish our carousing.

Fierce warriors rushed to meet us; We met them, and o'erthrew them: They struggled hard to beat us, But we conquered them, and slew them.

As we drove our prize at leisure, The king marched forth to catch us: His rage surpa.s.sed all measure, But his people could not match us.

He fled to his hall-pillars; And, ere our force we led off, Some sacked his house and cellars, While others cut his head off.

We there, in strife bewildering, Spilt blood enough to swim in: We orphaned many children, And widowed many women.

The eagles and the ravens We glutted with our foemen; The heroes and the cravens, The spearmen and the bowmen.

We brought away from battle, And much their land bemoaned them, Two thousand head of cattle, And the head of him who owned them: Ednyfed, King of Dyfed, His head was borne before us; His wine and beasts supplied our feasts, And his overthrow, our chorus.

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